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To the Faith, I prayed
To the Faith, I prayed
For the weak hearted
For the weak willed
To the Faith, I prayed
To the Faith, I prayed
For the ones that endured
For the ones that fell
To the Faith, I prayed
To the Faith, I prayed
For all that suffered
For all that was lost
To the Faith, I prayed
To the Faith, I prayed
For their hope to come
For their courage to come
To the Faith, I prayed
To the Faith, I prayed
That light may come
That light may shine
To the Faith, I prayed
To the Faith, I prayed
And still I hoped
And still I prayed
To the Faith, I prayed
For the weak hearted
For the weak willed
To the Faith, I prayed
To the Faith, I prayed
For the ones that endured
For the ones that fell
To the Faith, I prayed
To the Faith, I prayed
For all that suffered
For all that was lost
To the Faith, I prayed
To the Faith, I prayed
For their hope to come
For their courage to come
To the Faith, I prayed
To the Faith, I prayed
That light may come
That light may shine
To the Faith, I prayed
To the Faith, I prayed
And still I hoped
And still I prayed
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Words to Emotion
I wish I could tell you
I was doing okay
the words and emotions
would be one in the same
I want to smile and feel
the happiness rush through me
what a world it would be
if my emotions followed
the words that I wished
them to be.
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Fallen
When I was little, I held my hands up
and there was always a bigger pair
there to pick me up, raise me up
Dark and cold both accumulate near the ground
but I had found
a path to heaven, now forgotten
as the earth turns 'round;
So overcome by confusion, how...?
I can't cast my demons out
one devil still pulls me down
off the earth and off my gentle cloud
I lay upon the ground,
bloodied, broken, beaten down
and lament my fate, silenced now
He recalls his immoralities as if
they were someone else's little slips
and though his words have scarred me
much deeper than any knife or whip
he parades through town, a man, a god
going on about life as
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no solution
I am afraid to sleep in the dark.
I can't fall asleep with a night light.
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I like it. I think the repetition works, in this case. It reminds me of an African-American spiritual like Simone's Sinnerman. I think it would make a good song.
I would leave this the way it is. It's simple and direct, but it works.
I would like to see more of your work. I might scroll through your gallery and see what I can find. This, though, is a good piece. Submit it to some groups and see if you can get it noticed.
I like the refrain of "to the faith, I prayed." I've never heard those words paired in quite that way. It's fresh but familiar.
Well done.